The table below show th number of cars produced im three countries from 2003 to 2009. Sumarize the infomation by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make compairisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the amount of automobiles produced in Argentina,
Australia
and Thailand
between 2003 and 2009.
Overall
, Argentina faced a downfall in production rate while
Australia
made significant improvements over the years. Thailand
had fluctuations over the
time , but Correct article usage
apply
that
changes didn't prevent the country Correct pronoun usage
those
to be
on top of the statistics .
At the very beginning of 2003, Argentina listed second with a total of 400000 cars. After 2 years, these numbers decreased Change preposition
from being
50
% in comparison with previous years' results and ended up with 200000. In 2009, the state hit rock bottom and scored 161.00 till the end of the period.
Change preposition
by 50
Thailand
made it to first place in 2003 with 700.000, which was 500.000 more than Australia
. In 2005 Thailand
had skyrocketed result of 1119000 , however
, that number went down gradually and stayed at 999000 in2009
. Correct your spelling
in 2009
On the other hand
, Australia
managed to double the amount of production in 2005. At the end
of 2009, private transport manufacturers were 600.000 in Australia
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