The table below show th number of cars produced im three countries from 2003 to 2009. Sumarize the infomation by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make compairisons where relevant.

The table below show th number of cars produced im three countries from 2003 to 2009. Sumarize the infomation by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make compairisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the amount of automobiles produced in Argentina,
Australia
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and
Thailand
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between 2003 and 2009.
Overall
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, Argentina faced a downfall in production rate
while
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Australia
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made significant improvements over the years.
Thailand
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had fluctuations over
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time , but
that
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changes didn't prevent the country
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on top of the statistics . At the very beginning of 2003, Argentina listed second with a total of 400000 cars. After 2 years, these numbers decreased
50
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% in comparison with previous years' results and ended up with 200000. In 2009, the state hit rock bottom and scored 161.00 till the end of the period.
Thailand
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made it to first place in 2003 with 700.000, which was 500.000 more than
Australia
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. In 2005
Thailand
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had skyrocketed result of 1119000 ,
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, that number went down gradually and stayed at 999000
in2009
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in 2009
.
On the other hand
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,
Australia
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managed to double the amount of production in 2005.
At the end
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of 2009, private transport manufacturers were 600.000 in
Australia
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, thailand with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • car production
  • trends
  • growth
  • decline
  • peak production
  • increase
  • decrease
  • fluctuation
  • volume
  • relative position
  • trend analysis
  • manufacturing output
  • industrial performance
  • year-over-year change
  • comparison
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