The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.
The given line graph
illustrate
data about Change the verb form
illustrates
amount
and type of junk food consumed by Australian adolescents between 1975 and 2000. At first Correct article usage
the amount
glance
it Add a comma
glance,
has
clearly seen that Pizza and Hamburgers had an upward trend, Verb problem
is
while
Fish and Chips become
less popular.
Getting back to the details, Pizza started at 5 in 1975, after Wrong verb form
became
then
sharply improved to 90 in 1975 and stayed constant till 2000. Similarly
, Hamburgers begined
at 10 in 1975, afterwards quickly went up to 90 in 1985, next years gradually increased to 100 and stopped stable till 2000.
Turning to the declining figures, despite the fact that Fish and Chips started at 100 in 1975, Correct your spelling
began
then
it fluctuated and rapidly went down to 38 in 2000.
To sum up
, Pizza started at 5 in 1975 and changed to 90 in 1995, by
contrast
Fish and Chips started at 100 and dropped to 38 in 2000.Add the comma(s)
contrast,
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