The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment.

The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment.
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proportion
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of household earnings per month that
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spent on four different main expenditures in five nations located in Europe. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, it can be seen that individuals spend more on housing than other categories, with the exception of Turkey and Spain.
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, the
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of housing in the UK saw the highest figure,
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the opposite was true for clothing in France. Looking at the figures in
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detail, it can be seen that the
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of income
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spent on housing was highest in the UK, hitting 37%,
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the percentages in Turkey and Spain represented 20% and 18%, respectively.
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, the
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of France and Germany is comparably higher, at 31% and 33%, respectively. With regards to food and drink, that was spent mostly by Turkey, recorded at 36%.
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, these figures are slightly higher than in other nations, where they ranged from 22% to 31%. Turning to entertainment, Germany's percentage obviously dominates at 19%, whilst other nations saw figures ranging from 10% to 15%. Moving onto clothing, France saw the smallest
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of 7%,
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the percentage of others ranged between 8% and 15%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Proportion
  • Household income
  • Allocate
  • Basic necessities
  • Expenditures
  • Essentials
  • Economy
  • Living conditions
  • Standard of living
  • Cultural significance
  • Leisure activities
  • Financial prioritization
  • Noticeable trends
  • Unusual allocations
  • Society's values
  • Economic status
  • Illustrates
  • Highlights
  • Comparison
  • Analyze
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