Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more importnant environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is indeed true that in
recent
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the recent
era
because of global environmental issues flora and fauna Fix the agreement mistake
eras
gets
affected widely. There are multifactors which Wrong verb form
have been
affecting
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affect
the
nature mostly in various ways Correct article usage
apply
such
as loss
of Correct article usage
the loss
imporatant
natural Correct your spelling
important
resaources
as well. In Correct your spelling
resources
this
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essay
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I
my
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on my
opinon
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opinion
on
we are not just Correct word choice
that
loosing
only herbs and animals but Correct your spelling
losing
lot
of other natural Change the article
a lot
phenomenon
as well.
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phenomena
Majority
of people Correct article usage
The majority
believes
that the Change the verb form
believe
recent
most important concern is Correct word choice
apply
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the lost
lost
of essential herbs. Replace the word
loss
Due to
global warming
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warming,
thare
were several forest Correct your spelling
there
fire
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fires
occured
in many Correct your spelling
occurred
counties
. Correct your spelling
countries
firstly
, trees are not just source
of exchanging oxygen and co2 cycle but it has Add an article
a source
great
impact on providing sustainable sources in Add an article
a great
health
industry and Add an article
the health
bussiness
sectors in wooden furniture or Correct your spelling
business
in
paper Change preposition
apply
industies
. Correct your spelling
industries
secondly
, natural
life cycle Add an article
the natural
is depends
upon Change the verb form
depends
extinction
of Correct article usage
the extinction
animal
. Fix the agreement mistake
animals
Also
, wast
society Correct your spelling
waste
is relies
on animal production Change the verb form
relies
such
as maily
part of Correct your spelling
mainly
food
.
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the food
Neverthless
, the current global issues Correct your spelling
Nevertheless
is
global warming, Correct subject-verb agreement
are
Correct article usage
the emmision
emmision
of Correct your spelling
emission
emissions
corbon
dioxide and other fatal gases in Correct your spelling
carbon
air
which produce tremendous Add an article
the air
health related
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health-related
conditons
in humans. Correct your spelling
conditions
Bacuse
of that there are Correct your spelling
Because
prodution
of heatwaves and glacier Correct your spelling
production
snowmountains
are melting which has devasted Correct your spelling
snow mountains
snow-mountains
result
in Wrong verb form
resulted
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the exntiction
exntiction
of snow animals. Correct your spelling
extinction
However
, there are
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is
risen
concern about less rain and burning heat Wrong verb form
rising
certain
parts of the world Change preposition
in certain
due to
changes in envirnmental
effects.
I highly Correct your spelling
environmental
belive
there should be more effective and Correct your spelling
believe
alterative
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alternative
solution
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solutions
on
global warming concerns as it is the Change preposition
to
rootcause
of all weather and Correct your spelling
root cause
global related
problems. Apart from that, Add a hyphen
global-related
goverments
and even mankind Correct your spelling
governments
government
needs
to think about Change the verb form
need
to save
natural Change the verb form
saving
resouces
first and so on Correct your spelling
resources
thats
how we will protect other Correct your spelling
that's
that
impotant
forest species.Correct your spelling
important
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