Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more importnant environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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because of global environmental issues flora and fauna
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affected widely. There are multifactors which
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nature mostly in various ways
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we are not just
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only herbs and animals but
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of other natural
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as well.
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that the
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most important concern is
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lost
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of essential herbs.
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global
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thare
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there
were several forest
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fires
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occured
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occurred
in many
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, trees are not just
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of exchanging oxygen and co2 cycle but it has
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impact on providing sustainable sources in
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industry and
bussiness
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business
sectors in wooden furniture or
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paper
industies
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industries
.
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,
natural
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the natural
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life cycle
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upon
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the extinction
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of
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animals
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.
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society
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on animal production
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global warming,
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emmision
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emission
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carbon
dioxide and other fatal gases in
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which produce tremendous
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conditons
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conditions
in humans.
Bacuse
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of that there are
prodution
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production
of heatwaves and glacier
snowmountains
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snow mountains
snow-mountains
are melting which has devasted
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in
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extinction
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, there
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concern about less rain and burning heat
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in certain
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parts of the world
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environmental
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there should be more effective and
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solution
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on
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global warming concerns as it is the
rootcause
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root cause
of all weather and
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problems. Apart from that,
goverments
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governments
government
and even mankind
needs
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to think about
to save
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natural
resouces
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resources
first and so on
thats
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that's
that
how we will protect other
impotant
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important
forest species.
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