The chart below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Demonstrating for consideration is the information pertaining to the film's production of five distinct nations in terms of quantity between 2007 and 2009.
From an observational perspective, it can be seen that B,C and E witnessed an upward trend
whereas
the opposite was true for A and D. Additionally
, country A produced the most films
throughout the time frame.
Looking at the illustration in further
detail, B and C stood at around 49 films
and 9 films
in 2007 before increasing considerably by 11 films
and 10 films
in the next 2 years respectively. Similarly
, E remained relatively stable during the same period, starting at just above 10 films
, it
rose slightly to approximately 11 Correct word choice
and it
films
in 2009.
Turning to the remainng
groups, A has the most productive film industry Correct your spelling
remaining
comparing
to others with nearly 90 Wrong verb form
compared
films
in 2007 and remained intact to
the following year. Change preposition
in
However
, in 2009, there was a steady decline to exactly 80 films
. Regarding nation D, only around 18 films
were produced in 2007 and it's
figure dropped to 10 Correct your spelling
its
films
in 2008. At the end
of the time line
, it went up by Correct your spelling
timeline
estimated
3 Correct article usage
an estimated
films
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