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The chart below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Demonstrating for consideration is the information pertaining to the film's production of five distinct nations in terms of quantity between 2007 and 2009. From an observational perspective, it can be seen that B,C and E witnessed an upward trend
whereas
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 the opposite was true for A and D.
Additionally
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, country A produced the most
films
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 throughout the time frame. Looking at the illustration in
further
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 detail, B and C stood at around 49
films
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 and 9
films
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 in 2007 before increasing considerably by 11
films
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 and 10
films
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 in the next 2 years respectively.
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, E remained relatively stable during the same period, starting at just above 10
films
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,
it
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and it
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 rose slightly to approximately 11
films
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 in 2009. Turning to the
remainng
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remaining
 groups, A has the most productive film industry
comparing
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compared
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 to others with nearly 90
films
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 in 2007 and remained intact
to
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in
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 the following year.
However
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, in 2009, there was a steady decline to exactly 80
films
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. Regarding nation D, only around 18
films
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 were produced in 2007 and
it's
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its
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 figure dropped to 10
films
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 in 2008.
At the end
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 of the
time line
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timeline
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, it went up by
estimated
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an estimated
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 3
films
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.
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