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The chart below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart compares five different
countries
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 in terms of their film production from 2007 to 2009.
Overall
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, the number of
films
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 produced in
countries
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B
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, C, and E increased,
whereas
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 a decline was observed in the remaining
countries
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. Notably,
country
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 A remained the most prolific producer despite a slight drop, followed by
country
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B
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. At the start of the period, with 90
films
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 released,
country
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 A was by far the largest film producer. Meanwhile,
B
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 made 50
films
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, more than triple the figure for D, at just around 15 units. The movie production in
countries
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 C and E was relatively modest, with each releasing only 10 movies in 2007.
Thereafter
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, the number of
films
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 that
country
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 A distributed modestly declined to 80 units in 2009, still ranking first.
In contrast
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,
country
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B
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 saw a significant rise, increasing by 20
films
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 to end the period at 70
films
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. C and E
also
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 experienced moderate increases, with figures rising to around 20 and 11
films
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, respectively. D experienced a slight drop in its film production in 2008, after which it recovered to around 15
films
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 in the following year.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, films, b, country with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "modest" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Film production
  • Trends
  • Consistently
  • Significant
  • Comparisons
  • Patterns
  • Increased/Decreased
  • Analyzed
  • Anomalies
  • Industry changes
  • Economic factors
  • Cultural aspects
  • Collectively
  • Overall trend
  • Reported
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