The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 

Write at least 150 words.
The chart shows the four Asian nations' proportion of urban population between 1970 and 2040.
Overall
,
it is clear that
all the countries will have been increasing for a 70-year period in the year
of
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2040.
Malaysia
is the place that has gained the most citizens in the
last
50
years
. In the next 20
years
, researchers predict that the cities in
Malaysia
will be ascending and it will still be the highest one in the report. Looking at the graph more closely, one can see that at the beginning of
this
research, the Philippines' performance was a little higher than
Malaysia
's, but in the end, the number is about 55%. The increase in
this
land is the least. Thailand grows slowly, and the percentage of cities there is relatively lower than others. Indonesia's pattern is almost the same as
Malaysia
's. Both of them will have
gain
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approximately 50% in these 70
years
. The Philippines was the one which decreased in the
years
1990 to 2010.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • cities
  • Asian countries
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • estimations
  • urban
  • increasing
  • steadily
  • Japan
  • China
  • rise
  • urbanization
  • South Korea
  • India
  • upward trend
  • slow pace
  • surpass
  • resided
  • projected
  • moderate increase
  • significant surge
  • exceed
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