The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity us used in an average English home.
The given charts provide information about how much electrical
power
(unit) is used in England during twenty-four hours per day in periods of summer and winter, along with
the proportion of spending
Verb problem
apply
electricity
in household
.
As can be seen from the first line graph, Fix the agreement mistake
households
the
significant amount of Correct article usage
a
power
is used in cold
period, rather than in summer. Add an article
a cold
the cold
Moreover
, half of the amount of electricity
is used for heating the rooms and water.
To begin
with the first chart, the use of electricity
units in the winter starts at around 35000 and then
rises to 40000 in
3:00 am. After that, its use decreases to under 30000 in 7:00 am and Change the preposition
at
then
grows dramatically to 40000 till 1 pm. However
, electrical power
oscillates between 13:00-18:00 pm after reaches a peak at just under 50000 in 21:00 pm. Despite this
, it drops quickly after 9 pm to 35000, similarly
to the usage rate in the beginning of the day.
According to
the second pie chart, a more than half of power
is spent on heating rooms and water. For other household mod cons, such
as ovens, kettle, washing machines, power
usage makes up 17,5%. For other two categories consumption of electricity
indicates 15%.Submitted by shani.menglieva.94 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words power, electricity with synonyms.
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