The system used for rubbish or garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. It is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours Suggest what should be done about the problem
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
email regarding some problems we have faced with rubbish collection, which has caused serious concerns for many residents, in our area.
As you might be aware, the collection time used to be 8 at night; however
, one week ago, we were informed that it would be transferred to 12 at midnight from the 1st of July.
A point that is
worth considering is that a significant percentage of people in our area, including me, are employees. This
means that everyone sleeps before midnight and, therefore
, will not be able to put out the litter at the due time.
You are requested to kindly revise the decision and change the time to its previous one. Also
, according to
our group consultation, 7 p.m. or the latest 10 p.m. also
can be dedicated to collecting the garbage.
We are looking forward to getting your reply,
Faithfully yours,
Maria SobhaniSubmitted by mojgan.sobhani on
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task achievement
The letter could benefit from a more specific description of the problems caused by the improper rubbish collection. For example, mention if it leads to health concerns or attracts pests.
coherence cohesion
To enhance clarity, you might ensure that each paragraph develops a single idea with supporting details before moving to the next point.
task achievement
The letter is polite and the tone is suitable for addressing a local council, showing respect and courtesy.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate and enhance the overall formal quality of the letter.
coherence cohesion
The letter is logically structured, with a clear problem statement followed by an explanation and suggested solutions.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite