Due to aircraft will pollute the environment and affect climate change, and should not be grounded. Do you agree or disagree?

It’s sometimes argued that since flights produce air pollution with

emissions

, it’s necessary to remove

airplane

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from transport

services

. In my opinion, it would be wrong to ban flight

services

in any country.

Airplane

is a convenient and indispensable transportation, and it helps people across the country

and

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reach anywhere

by

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only

taking

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a short period of time. Without the

services

provided by airlines, it can cause a big change in people’s transportation

behavior

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and

further

damage the global economy.

Firstly

,

Airline

services

underlie goods shipping between cities and countries. It helps to faster the speed of making transactions, generating more trade value which is good for expanding the economy. It demonstrates that

airline

services

support the economy in any country. Not only because the financial contribution can be made by

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the airline

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airline

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, but

also

other

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because other

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industries can be influenced by

airline

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the airline

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business, another example can be

travel

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industry.

Airline

services

are important for

travel

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industry

,

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since the more

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provided, the more people travel to tourist attractions to consume their money.

Secondly

, Global warming and

greenhouse

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the greenhouse

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effect caused by

emissions

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the emissions

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of

airplane

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is a significant issue

that

is

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taken seriously recently, but there are some ways to solve

this

environmental problem. The

emission

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emissions

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produced by

airplanes

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can be a major problem that leads to global temperature

to rise

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and more extreme climate conditions.

Government

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The government

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now is working on environmental issues. It introduces

law

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to limit the

emissions

produced.

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, it imposes “green taxes” on

airlines

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companies.

Instead

of banning flights, the government advocates

people

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to take fewer flights abroad for holidays. In order to reduce the

emissions

produced, government and

airline

companies need to make

investment

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on

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inventing airplanes that consume less fuel. In conclusion,

airline

companies should continue to provide

airplane

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services

, since there are many brought advantages and solutions to reduce the

emissions

produced by

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.