Despite health warnings, a large number of people countinue to smoke all over the world. why should we be concernec about this?what soloutions would you suggest?

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all over the world is huge,

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healthiness

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matter. Economic damage and the danger of

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tobacco

tabacco

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concern

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for

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issue. The number of

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smoker

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around the world are almoust more than 1.3

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billion

and 80% per cent of them are

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poor

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their money

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smoking sigarets.

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deteriorating may injure the persons who are

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smoker

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are not reach

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that

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is, increasing the cost of

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cigarettes

sigarets

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cigarettes

so that most

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of

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smokers

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would not be able to buy

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it

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in

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way they have to smoke less.

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law for

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limitation

of smoking in houses, public place and almost everywhere.

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solution can help to decrease the range of smoking around the world. In all, if we

concider

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consider

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nessecary

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necessary

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be able to solve it as soon as possible, is clear I am not a

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professionalism

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carrier

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modifay

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befor

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