The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of retain the table shows where the money came from and the chart show how it was distributed summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons very relevant
The table shows that
both
years the most income Change preposition
in both
money
Use synonyms
camed
from the National Government and the Correct your spelling
came
less
income Replace the word
least
money
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camed
from the other sources Correct your spelling
came
also
the charts describe how the Linking Words
money
was spent in both years the most Use synonyms
money
was distributed on the salaries .
The table shows that in 2018 both the National Government and the local taxes were increased in the budget Use synonyms
also
the chart describes that in 2018 the salaries
Were dropped but there was a noticeable rise Linking Words
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in
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