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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ’ income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ’ income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
#households #income
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A glance at the bar chart provided reveals the number of
families
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 in the US by their
income
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 yearly in
three
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years
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 (2007, 2011 and 2015).
Overall
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, one particularly interesting fact highlighted by the figure is that the highest annual
income
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 belongs to people who
gain
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 $100,000 or more in 2015.
In contrast
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, the lowest annual
income
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 goes to people with less than $25,000 in 2011.
According to
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 what is shown, it is interesting to note that somewhere in the vicinity of 15 million
of
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households had an annual
income
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 lower than $25,000 in
three
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years
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.
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, about 20 million
of
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families
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 made money between $50.000 and $74,999 in
three
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years
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.
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, the annual
income
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 which was from $25,000 to $49,999 and lower than $25,000 belongs to about 25 to 30 million
of
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families
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 in 2005 and 2011.
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, it is reasonable to summarize that by far the highest number of
families
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 had an annual salary lower than $74,999 in
three
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years
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words families, income, three, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic landscape
  • Household income
  • Economic health
  • Income brackets
  • Trends
  • Inflation
  • Unemployment rates
  • Job market
  • Income disparity
  • Housing affordability
  • Access to education
  • Quality of life
  • Economic policies
  • Income inequality
  • Mitigating
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