The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps show information about the changes in the
road
access to the hospital in the city between 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, the road
system experienced significant changes with more facilities. In addition
, the road
access to the hospital was expanded with the addition of bus
infrastructure, parking facilities and more roundabout
In the north-east of the entrance road
, people constructed a new public car park near the Ring Road
. Moreover
, two roundabouts were built in the centre of the road
system, which was connected by the hospital road
.
As can be seen, there were two parking spaces for staff and six bus
stops in the west and the east in 2007, it was a bus
station and staff car park in 2010 respectively. Furthermore
, the bus
station to the southwest of the City Road
had two small linking roads to the roundabouts at the Ring Road
and City Road
.Submitted by huyentrang712 on
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