You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The
given
bar chart Verb problem
apply
compared
the amount of Wrong verb form
compares
British
who emigrated to 5 nations during 3 years from 2004 to 2007.
Overall
, it can be seen that emigration among 5 countries saw a decline, except for Australia
which was the only one experienced
an upward trend throughout the timeframe. Correct pronoun usage
that experienced
Additionally
, even though the British
Correct quantifier usage
number of British
emigrants
in Australia
dropped in the first year, it was still outstanding other
nations.
With regards to the first 3 countries which the Change preposition
in other
British
highly emigrated to, Australia
as well as
Spain started at around 42 and 35 thousand
people in 2004, respectively. As for the British
in Australia
, it slightly went down to about 38 thousand
a year later before reaching a peak of over 50 thousand
in 2006, however
, it then
decreased drastically to precisely 43 thousand
at the end
of the period. Meanwhile, in Spain, emigration declined gradually to around 27 thousand
people over 4 years. Similarly
, there were a
5 Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
thousand
emigrants
drop from 25 thousand
to 20 thousand
in the 4-year period.
Turning the focus on
the remaining countries where the Change preposition
to
British
were unlikely to emigrate. In the USA, there was a fluctuation between nearly 25 and 18 thousands of the emigrants
from 2004 to 2007. In terms of France, although
its British
emigrants
rose by double from 22 thousand
between 2004 and 2005, it saw a sharp decline to under 10 thousand
until 2007.Submitted by Nghỉ hè vui vẻ cả nhà on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words british, australia, emigrants, thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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