You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The
given
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bar chart
compared
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the amount of
British
who emigrated to 5 nations during 3 years from 2004 to 2007.
Overall
, it can be seen that emigration among 5 countries saw a decline, except for
Australia
which was the only one
experienced
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that experienced
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an upward trend throughout the timeframe.
Additionally
, even though the
British
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number of British
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emigrants
in
Australia
dropped in the first year, it was still outstanding
other
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in other
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nations. With regards to the first 3 countries which the
British
highly emigrated to,
Australia
as well as
Spain started at around 42 and 35
thousand
people in 2004, respectively. As for the
British
in
Australia
, it slightly went down to about 38
thousand
a year later before reaching a peak of over 50
thousand
in 2006,
however
, it
then
decreased drastically to precisely 43
thousand
at the end
of the period. Meanwhile, in Spain, emigration declined gradually to around 27
thousand
people over 4 years.
Similarly
, there were
a
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5
thousand
emigrants
drop from 25
thousand
to 20
thousand
in the 4-year period. Turning the focus
on
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to
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the remaining countries where the
British
were unlikely to emigrate. In the USA, there was a fluctuation between nearly 25 and 18 thousands of the
emigrants
from 2004 to 2007. In terms of France,
although
its
British
emigrants
rose by double from 22
thousand
between 2004 and 2005, it saw a sharp decline to under 10
thousand
until 2007.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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  • emigration
  • migrate
  • destination
  • trend
  • notable
  • significant
  • spike
  • drop
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • decline
  • stable
  • consistent
  • overview
  • summarize
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