The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001

The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001
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The pie charts contained data on
expenditure
in a UK school in three different timestamps, 1981, 1991, and 2001.
Overall
, Insurance, teachers’ salaries and equipment witnessed varying degrees of increase,
while
other workers’ payment and resource patterns dropped.
Additionally
, academic staff salaries contributed the largest proportion of
expenditure
throughout the survey
whereas
insurance had the smallest share.
To begin
, wages paid to the teacher accounted for the most significant value in 1981. It
then
increased to a half before being cut by 10% in 2001.
This
statistic was followed by other workers’ salaries. In 1981, the number was nearly a
third,
after which a decrease in 1991 and 2001 was registered, ending with 15%. A similar trend was observed in money spent on furniture and equipment. Beginning at 15%,
this
group experienced a noticeable fall of 10% in 1991 before having a trend reversal to reach a quarter of the total
expenditure
at the end
of the time shown. Turning to the
expenditure
on resources, the figure started at 15%, which is equal to furniture and equipment.
Subsequently
, it went up by only 5% during the first decade and in the third period shown, it was halved.
Finally
, Insurance had by far the smallest category out of five at the beginning with 1%.
This
figure changed minimally/negligibly throughout a decade until 2001 when it climbed fourfold.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • budget allocation
  • educational expenditure
  • financial management
  • infrastructure investment
  • evolution of costs
  • annual spending
  • strategic funding
  • capital outlay
  • operational costs
  • resource allocation
  • fiscal trends
  • cost analysis
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