Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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appeers

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appears

appear

among people that

phones

are not allowed to

used

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be used

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by

children

during

school

days

but other believes

on

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apply

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the opposite.

Phones

in

school

day can distract

children

from

study

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studying

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, but

in

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on

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the other hand,

phones

can be

helpfull

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helpful

for them to

study

with many

advance

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features. I believe the

use

of

phones

by

children

in

school

days

should be ok as long as there is a

parents

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parental

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control The idea of prohibiting

children

using

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from using

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phones

in

schools

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school

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days

because

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is because

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it can distract them

to

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from studying

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study

or

do

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doing

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their homework. It has been a concern by people that

an

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apply

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excessive usage of

phone

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phones

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by

young

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the young

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generation can be

harmfull

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harmful

. It is

an

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apply

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evidence that

game

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games

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and social media

for instance

, which

featured

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are featured

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by

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on

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phones

, can influence

children

to

an

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apply

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excessive

phones

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phone

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usage and

leads

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lead

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them to neglect the value of

study

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studying

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.

On the other hand

, the

use

of

phones

can be

helpfull

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helpful

to

study

by

children

with features in it. The access to the internet and some applications in current

phones

with high technology is considered

helpfull

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helpful

for

children

to

study

.

For example

,

children

can access any source of information required with

the

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an

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internet

connections

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connection

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and there are a lot of applications available that can help

children

to

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apply

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study

such

as

Ruang

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the Ruang

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Guru application which

consist

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consists

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of learning material which accessible

easly

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easily

or even

translation

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application. I believe that the

use

of

phones

can be a good development for

children

to help them

study

during

school

days

with parental supervision.

Parent

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A parent

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should control

on

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apply

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the

use

of

phones

by their

children

, in terms of purpose limitation and time limitations.

Children

should be advised and supervised that

phone

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phones

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can be used during

school

days

only for

study

purpose

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purposes

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and limit them

into

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to

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particular

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a particular

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time to prevent them from excessive

use

. In conclusion, the debate

wheter

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whether

children

should be allowed to

use

phones

during

school

days

or not

are

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is

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still apperead in society. But

i

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I

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personally believe with parental supervision, the

use

of

phones

can be

an advantages

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an advantage

advantages

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to help

children

to

study

.