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A friend has offered you some work in his company. You are currently employed and not able to start for 3 months. Write a reply to your friend. In your letter: – give details of what you know about his company. – explain your current situation. – Give your answer to the offer and explain why

#friend #work #company #months #situation #offer
Hi Peter, Thank you for your job offer
last
 week. It will be a great
oppotunity
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opportunity
 for me to
upprade
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upgrade
 myself if I would work
in
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at
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 Samsung Tech Company. Your company is
the
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one the
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 top ten technology conglomerates in Asia, I heard about annual training courses, interesting allowance and many chances for
aboard
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abroad
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 promotions...
However
, I have to say that I can not take it. As you know, I have been working for AA Tech Company
10
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for 10
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 years and
this
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during this
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 period I
am
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 in charge
for
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of
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 a big project, if
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task achievement
Include more details about the current project you are working on to fully explain your situation.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph conveys a single clear idea to improve coherence and cohesiveness.
task achievement
The use of a polite and friendly tone is very suitable for writing a letter to a friend.
coherence cohesion
The letter starts and ends with appropriate greetings, which is good for creating a coherent structure.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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