living in a country where you have to speak a foreigen language can cause seriouse social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
As far as I`m
concern
, having some problems Wrong verb form
concerned
such
as communication issue
and some Fix the agreement mistake
issues
partical
ones I believe that happens when you are living in Correct your spelling
particular
another countries
and you have to speak another language. I will list these problems that might Replace the adjective
another country
other countries
to
Change the verb form
apply
happend
.
Social matters can happen in all of the groups Correct your spelling
happen
people
who Change preposition
of people
imigrated
or are Correct your spelling
emigrated
immigrated
migrated
tourist
. Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
These problem
can be not Change the determiner
This problem
These problems
undrestandig
Correct your spelling
understanding
understand
clear
the culture of that country, Change the word
clearly
ran
into some different Wrong verb form
running
law
that are confusing Fix the agreement mistake
laws
fore
somebody or doing some wrong Correct your spelling
for
acttivity
that are not Correct your spelling
activity
exeptable
Correct your spelling
acceptable
fore
the peoples of that country which might Correct your spelling
for
to
Change the verb form
apply
seprate
migrated Correct your spelling
separate
people
from the citizens.
On the other hand
, there are some practical problems could
make the Correct pronoun usage
that could
people
who have imigrated disapointed
, which means they Correct your spelling
immigrated disappointed
are not be
able to do the things Change the verb form
are not
like
that they want. Change preposition
apply
For example
, ordering foods
, finding Fix the agreement mistake
food
house
and buying a car. These simple things could be so difficult by speaking Add an article
a house
the house
another languages
and Replace the adjective
another language
other languages
people
always are concern
about scams.
In conclusion, Wrong verb form
concerned
people
must have a lots
of Correct the article-noun agreement
a lot
lots
problem
with their Fix the agreement mistake
problems
imigration witthout
knowing Correct your spelling
immigration without
languages
Correct article usage
the languages
as well as
their mothers
toung.Change noun form
mother's
mothers'
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task achievement
It's important to clearly state your position in the introduction. Begin with a clear thesis statement that specifically addresses whether you agree or disagree with the statement.
task achievement
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coherence cohesion
Work on improving cohesion by using linking words and phrases to connect your ideas smoothly. This will make your essay easier to follow and understand.
coherence cohesion
Be careful with grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors. Proofread your work to catch and correct errors such as 'imigrated' instead of 'immigrated', and 'undrestandig' instead of 'understanding'.
task achievement
Your essay addresses both social and practical problems, which shows a comprehensive understanding of the topic.
coherence cohesion
You outline multiple reasons why speaking a foreign language might cause difficulties, indicating a clear focus.
Fully explain your ideas
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- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
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