The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009.

The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009.
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The table illustrates information about the percentages of students taking part in four variety types of secondary
schools
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from 2000 to 2009.
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, it is clear from the figure that Community
schools
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recorded a moderate increase in whole years
while
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voluntary-controlled
schools
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and grammar educational centres experienced a significant reduction.
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, it is
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worth mentioning that there was a fall in specialist
schools
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in terms of attendance proportion. Looking at the details, even though community
schools
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made up the lowest amount at the beginning of the given period at 12% they reached the top with 58% by 2009
whereas
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, specialist
schools
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witnessed a steep decline from 12% to 11%.
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, the attendance rate in voluntary-controlled
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went down gradually from 52 to 20 per cent,
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,
although
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grammar school was in second position with 24 per cent in the table at the beginning of the given period , by 2009, it experienced a rapid decrease. in terms of attending.
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