The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the infomation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compasions where relevant. Wirte at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

Summarise the infomation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compasions where relevant. Wirte at least 150 words.
The diagram indicates the trend of different kinds of
meat
consumption
with grams per person per week in European countries from 1979 to 2004. The graph shows us that
chicken
is the top
meat
consumption
category compared with others. As the picture,
although
beef
was
the
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top of
meat
consumption
in 1979,
but
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it
was
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dropped gradually. We can find out that in
this
period, people were going to reduce
beef
consumption
.
In contrast
, the figure for
consumption
for
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grams per person of
chicken
was 150g and steadily increased to around 250g in 2004.
Additionally
,
chicken
surpassed
beef
in 1989. In the other category — Lamb, it was
second
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high
consumption
for the
meet
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category, but it decreased dramatically between 1979 and 1984,
same
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as
beef
. The
last
, compared with other
meat
trends, fish stabilized from 1979 to 2004, with the grams kept at approximately 50.
To sum up
, the
meat
consumption
in European countries,
chicken
changed a lot between 1979 and 2004, and fish remained steady.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.

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