The graph below shows the percentage of men and women aged 60-64 who were employed in four countries in 1970 and 2000
The chart illustrates the proportion of
employees
who are aged 60-64 in four nations between 1970 and 2000.
Overall
, both sexes had an increase in the number of employees
, except for females in Belgium and Australia. Additionally
, the number of employed men was much higher than females.
As can be seen from the graph, Belgian females from 60-64 years old had similar data, around 7% and 8%, while
males soared from 19% to 79% at the end
of the year 2000. This
was followed by Australia, where feminine workers declined exactly from 18% to 16% and the rate of masculine employees
during 2000 doubled to 76% compared to 1970.
Turning to the data of Japan, the percentage of workers who were 60-64-year-old women, was proved to achieving more than the first year 3% at the end
of the period shown, whereas
the number of men saw an upward trend to 76% throughout 2000. Regarding the US, American girly staff experienced a decrease to 36% after starting from 38%. Contrary to the evidence of women, unfeminine employees
seemed to see a noticeable rise from 55% to 73% respectively.Submitted by [email protected] on
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