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The tables below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five parts of the world in 2006

The tables below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five parts of the world in 2006
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potato
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 consumption and production in five different parts of the world during the period of 2006.
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, it is remarkable that the consumption figure for Europe was by far the highest among
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 areas. In the same timeframe,
Asia
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 was the major
potato
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 producer throughout the year. In terms of the consumption of potatoes, the sector of Europe headed the list with roughly 58
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 per person, making it the dominant consumer. Meanwhile, Africa exhibited a contrasting pattern, contributing approximately 14
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 per person
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 intake.
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, North
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 ranked
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second position with about 60kg per person. Followed by the figure for
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 at around 26
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 per Asian.
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 an average South and Central American intake
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 23 kilograms
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 during the timeframe. Regarding
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production,
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, despite its lowest
potato
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 accumulation, accounted for more than 131
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tonnes
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. Europe’s
potato
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 harvesting was the second largest, approximately 5
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tonnes
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 less than that of
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. Meanwhile, South and Central America citizens ate roughly 16
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tonnes
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 which made it ranked the bottom position.
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, 16,4 and 24,7
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tonnes
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 were shown respectively for the number of grown potatoes.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words potato, asia, kg, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Agricultural capacity
  • Dietary preferences
  • Cultural significance
  • Economic affordability
  • Trade policies
  • Food security
  • Production levels
  • Consumption patterns
  • Imbalance
  • Global agricultural trends
  • Technological advancements
  • Supply chain enhancements
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