the table below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five parts of the world in 2006

the table below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five parts of the world in 2006
demonstrated in the tables are statistics on the information about the production and the consumption of potatoes in five different parts of the world during 2006. Units are measured in
Kg
per person and in
million
tons.
overall
, it can be seen that the consumption of potatoes, in Europe was the highest
while
in Africa was the lowest, and in the production of potatoes, Asia was the lowest in
this
group. beginning with consumption, Europe was the highest with 96,1
kg
but Africa was the lowest with 14,1
kg
south and central
America
and Asia were similar around 25
kg
and North
America
was the second most with 57,9
kg
. turning to the remaining statistics , Asia was the highest in production with 131,2
million
. the second biggest was Europe with 126,3
million
. south and Central
America
and Africa were similar around 16
million
.
finally
, North
America
was the third biggest with 24,7
million

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