The line graph below shows the percentage of people in Africa subscribing to mobile and fixed-line phones from 1994 to 2004.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of telephone subscribers in
Africa
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African
country
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countries
amont
two different categories namely mobile and Correct your spelling
among
amount
fixed-line
phones between 1994 and 2004.
Overall
, it can be seen that there was an increase in the percentage of individuals subscribing to mobile and fixed-line
over the period time
. The rate Change preposition
of time
fore
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for
fixed-line
was the highest but in 2001, it was overtaken by the figure for mobile over the decade.
Looking at the data for fixed-line
phones, it began with
1,7% , followed by a slow Change preposition
at
fluctuate
through Replace the word
fluctuation
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a 10-years
10-years
period and in the year 2004, it Correct your spelling
10-year
final
rose to 3,1%.
Moving to the figure for mobile phones, it started at 0,06%, Change the adjective
finally
was
low Correct pronoun usage
which was
to compare
to the others, after which it experienced a gradual growth to approximately 1,6% in 2000. Change the verb form
compared
Then
it witnessed a dramatic rocketed
to 8,8% in the Replace the word
rocket
last
year of the period and that was surpassed the proportion for fixed-line
telephones, become
the highest figure from 2002 onwards.Wrong verb form
becoming
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fixed-line with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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