Some people believe that studying at univeristy or college is the best route to a successful career,while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

The majority of people often say that the best way to gain

successful

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life is

studying

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by studying

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at

college

or university,

while

others think that the way forward is

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a job after school.Both viewpoints are valid but I prefer

former

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the former

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choice and I will highlight the reason in the following essay. It must be understood that learning at university is the best route to a successful career.

This

means companies have a tendency to receive people who have qualifications and have

better

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a better

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grasp

in

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of

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that major.

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a citizen

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citizen

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citizens

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who have university

degree

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degrees

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when

apply

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applying

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to

the

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business,

they

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are able to pass the interview compared to those who do not have any qualifications.

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,they can get high

salary

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salaries

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rather than each

others

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.

However

,there are numerous

population

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populations

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those

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of those

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who get successful in occupation.It means they drop out of

college

to get the experience for the job to earn money at an early age.

This

may be true but lack of folk who do not continue the lesson to gain

dream

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life.Result,we should focus on

study

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studying

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as well as

dig

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deep into our major. From my point of view,I believe the degree of

college

is so vital for our future.

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,we

are

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can

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easy

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to

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apply

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advance our

career

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careers

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and gain more profit. In conclusion,there are many

way

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ways

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to

success

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succeed

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but studying at

college

is always

take

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taking

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the lead.

Hence

,reaching our dream and getting

successful

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a successful

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career.