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The graph below shows four methods of dealing with waste in four countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows four methods of dealing with waste in four countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The figure below
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 four different ways to tackle chemical waste in four countries. The bar chart
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 the unit in percentage.
Overall
 it can be seen that
recycled
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the recycled
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 method has dropped sharply, whilst landfilled increased significantly.
Furthermore
 both methods burnt and used as chemicals go up and
then
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fell
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 down again. Starting with landfilled, which got the lowest proportion at around 7%.
However
, in Italy and Spain, it rose to 40% and
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reached
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 a peak in
UK
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the UK
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 at nearly 65%. Moving onto
recycled
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the recycled
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 method, in
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the Netherland
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Netherland
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Netherlands
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 it was the highest one at approximately 70% and got the lowest percentage in Spain at 11%. Turning to the remaining statistic, burnt in
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 has been selecting at 10%,
while
 it got triple Spain and
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became
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 the lowest
methods
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method
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 in
UK
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the UK
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 at nearly 3%.
Finally
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 it can be observed that used as chemicals
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 popular in these countries so it got a quite low percentage at around 16-18% in three countries except
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 where it got 13%
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