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Band 2.5

Some people think that reading is always a good habit , others feel it depends on which books a person is reading . Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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grammar
Make sure to proofread your essay thoroughly to catch and correct any spelling and grammatical errors. This includes ensuring that every sentence is clear and well-structured.
coherence cohesion
To improve coherence and cohesion, ensure that each paragraph has a clear main idea and that these ideas are logically connected. Use linking words and phrases to guide the reader through your argument.
task achievement
Provide more relevant and specific examples to support your main points. This will strengthen your argument and make your essay more convincing.
task achievement
You have addressed both sides of the argument and provided your own opinion, which is essential for achieving a high score in task response.
task achievement
The essay shows a good understanding of the topic and attempts to discuss it from different perspectives.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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