The chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002.
The following bar chart represents the information about
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the number
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in
rail
, heavy rail
, light rail
, bus, and demand respond
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cases
per 100 million passengers miles travelled or PMT
, in 2002.
Overall
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the rate
incidents
and injuries of travelled
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travelling
rail
was the lowest, whereas
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in the compared types of transportation in the given timeframe. Wrong verb form
be found
However
, it is interesting to note that the statistics of injured commuters was
fewer than that of the reported Correct subject-verb agreement
were
incidents
in every types
of travelling means.
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type
To begin
with, it is obvious to see that the demand
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demanded
respond
has the highest number of Replace the word
response
incidents
at approximately 240 cases
PMT
, which was trippled
that of the light Correct your spelling
tripled
rail
and bus at about 80 cases
PMT
. Followed by the heavy rail
and commuter rail
at 50 cases
PMT
and 20 cases
PMT
, respectively.
In regards with
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the injuries
injuries
rate in each type of transportation has Fix the agreement mistake
injury
similar
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a similar
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incident
rate with a slight Correct article usage
the incident
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cases
PMT
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