The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
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The maps illustrate how an
island
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used to look before and how it looks after some tourist facilities were built. In terms of nature, before the changes, the
island
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had some plants and a beach in the left corner. After the reconstruction, all the trees have remained in the same position and some more have been added to the right of the
island
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. In terms of construction, the most striking is the fact that after the changes, the isolated
island
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has become a tourist resort, with a pier, from which a vehicle track leads to the reception, and
then
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to the restaurant. On both sides of the reception, accommodations have been built, with a footpath connecting them and the beach, which has been upgraded to a swimming area.
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, from being an isolated wild
island
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before the construction, the
island
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has become a tourist resort with developed infrastructure and amenities,
while
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original plants have been preserved and even some more have been added.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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