The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The maps illustrate how an
island
used to look before and how it looks after some tourist facilities were built.
In terms of nature, before the changes, the island
had some plants and a beach in the left corner. After the reconstruction, all the trees have remained in the same position and some more have been added to the right of the island
.
In terms of construction, the most striking is the fact that after the changes, the isolated island
has become a tourist resort, with a pier, from which a vehicle track leads to the reception, and then
to the restaurant. On both sides of the reception, accommodations have been built, with a footpath connecting them and the beach, which has been upgraded to a swimming area.
Overall
, from being an isolated wild island
before the construction, the island
has become a tourist resort with developed infrastructure and amenities, while
original plants have been preserved and even some more have been added.Submitted by vikiregev on
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