The table shows data about what people in the UK thought the government should increase spending on. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows data about what people in the UK thought the government should increase spending on.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Presented for consideration is a table illustrating the proportion of what the UK government should spend more on by their citizens. 
Overall
, it can be seen that males thought that the government should spend more on
education
and other areas,
while
their counterparts showed more interest in
health
.
Additionally
, individuals who are over 35 years old believed their government should pay for
health
,
whereas
the younger generation preferred
education
.  Beginning with gender, there were more women who chose
health
as their priority than men, reporting 48% and 32%, respectively. Turning to
education
, where 55% of male citizens thought that funding should be allocated for
education
,
while
the percentage of women just accounted for 40%. Behind
this
level, just under 15% of both men and women chose other areas.  Moving onto the age group, it is evident that 48% of people from 35 to 54 years old chose
health
and individuals who are in the 55-64 and over 65 groups stood at 52% and 72%, in that order. In reference to the 18-24 and 25-34 groups, just under 40% of them chose
health
,
however
, they preferred
education
, recording 40% and 52%, respectively.
While
the percentage of other age groups who chose
education
was under 27%. With respect to other areas, their proportion ranged from 13% to 35%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words education, health with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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