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The charts illustrate the number of people who were affected by four types of noise pollution in day and night in cities and rural areas in 2007.

The charts illustrate the number of people who were affected by four types of noise pollution in day and night in cities and rural areas in 2007.
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The given bar charts
illustrates
Change the verb form
illustrate
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 the quantity of people who are affected by various types of
noise
Use synonyms
 pollution in urban and rural areas .
Overall
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 , it can be seen that
the
Correct article usage
apply
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most people suffered from
noise
Use synonyms
 coming from traffic ,
whereas
Linking Words
 industry saw the least .
Additionally
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 , there are
much
Fix the agreement mistake
many
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 more individuals who bear the
noise
Use synonyms
 pollution
in
Change preposition
during
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day
Add an article
the day
a day
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 rather than
night
Change preposition
at night
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 Regarding the types of
noise
Use synonyms
 pollution where
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words noise with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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