the chart below shows what anthropology graudates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. the table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
The pie chart indicates information about the destinations of Anthropology students after graduation from university, and the table provides data about their salaries after five years of
work
.
Overall
, it appears that the the
majority of Anthropology Remove the redundancy
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graduates
are employed at full-time work
, and those who work
in the government sector receive the highest salary.
Looking at the detail
, it can be seen that 52% of Anthropology Fix the agreement mistake
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graduates
have a
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was followed by part-time work
and unemployed graduates
, at 15% and 12% respectively. Additionally
, graduates
at full-time postgrad study and graduates
at part-time work
and postgrad study were just 5% and 8% respectively. Finally
, 8% of graduates
were unknown in this
survey.
In terms of salary, graduates
who were employed in government sections received the highest amount of money, with half of them giving more than 100,000$, followed by freelance constitutions and private companies, with 40% and 30% respectively. Regarding 25,000$ to 49,000, which was the lowest salary, it appears that private companies took a lead, at 10%, twice as much as others.Submitted by Shahdadi.m76 on
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