The graph below shows the reported number of cases of influenza in people over 65 in a certain village in the UK from 1985 to 1995.
The line graph illustrates the
amount
of people Change the quantifier
number
which
were 65 and Correct pronoun usage
who
over ages
in a particular village which was located in the UK between 1985 to 1995.
Correct your spelling
overages
Overall
, there was a fluctuating trend in the entired
time period. Correct your spelling
entire
Additionally
, the highest number of people which
Correct pronoun usage
who
were
flu in the UK, in 1991.
As can be seen from the graph, the number of cases increased to 40 from around 55 in the first three years. In the next year, the figures slightly fell around 45. For the following three years, the amount of people who were influenza showed dramatically rose and reached a peak, at nearly 75 in 1991.
Verb problem
had
On the other hand
, as is shown by the graph, there was a slight decrease in the numbers
of cases from 1991 to 1993, at about 60. Fix the agreement mistake
number
Conversely
, between 1993 and 1994, the figures increased insignificantly around 65. And the number remained at around 60 at the end
of the period.Submitted by svdnruslu on
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