The table below gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
The given table illustrates the data about
consumption
of spent on items in five different nations in 2002.
Add an article
the consumption
Overall
, the section of consumer goods that all nations spent most on was food, drinks and tobacco, which was almost three times over than other sections. In contrast
, the category of consumer leisure and education had lowest
percentage in all five countries. Change the article
the lowest
Additionally
, Turkey was
Verb problem
had
higher
Correct article usage
a higher
propotion
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proportion
on
two categories than the other nations.
Change preposition
in
To begin
with food, drinks and tobacco, Turkey spent the most, at 32.14%. The consumption of Ireland was also
high, at 28,91% and contrarily while
Sweden spent only 15.77%. Italy and Spain spent 16.36% and 18.80% respectively. As can be seen the
graph, the lowest expenditure was on leisure and education which spent just under 5% in all countries. The figures Change preposition
in the
of
Turkey Change preposition
for
higher
than other countries at 4.35% and it was Add a missing verb
were higher
also
over double of Spain, at 1.98%.
On the other hand
, the category of clothing and footwear expenditure of those item
were between 9% and 5.40% in Italy and Sweden respectively.Change the determiner
that item
those items
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