The graph below shows the propoetion of a country's GDP spending on three different areas from 2000 to 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the propoetion of a country's GDP spending on three different areas from 2000 to 2025.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart
illustrate
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illustrates
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the percentage of a country's GDP
expending
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expanding
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on three aspects
bewteen
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between
2000 and 2025.
Overall
, the consumption of health
see
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an upward trend over the 25 years,
while
roads and
rialways
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railways
have the opposite tendency.
Meawhile
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Meanwhile
, the proportion of education
is fluctuated
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fluctuates
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during the same time. As is shown in the graph, the expenditure on health took up 3.9% in 2000,
then
after experiencing a steady increase, that figure is expected to be 7.5% in 2025.
In contrast
, the proportion of roads and railways decreased from 4.3% to 2.6% and was overtaken by health in 2006.
Additionally
, the percentage of education
rise
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from 2.1% to 3.2% in 2009,
while
after that it
begun
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to fall by 1% in 2013.
However
, it increased dramatically to 4.2% in 2025.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.

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