The graph below shows the propoetion of a country's GDP spending on three different areas from 2000 to 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart
illustrate
the percentage of a country's GDP Change the verb form
illustrates
expending
on three aspects Correct your spelling
expanding
bewteen
2000 and 2025.
Correct your spelling
between
Overall
, the consumption of health see
an upward trend over the 25 years, Change the verb form
sees
while
roads and rialways
have the opposite tendency. Correct your spelling
railways
Meawhile
, the proportion of education Correct your spelling
Meanwhile
is fluctuated
during the same time.
As is shown in the graph, the expenditure on health took up 3.9% in 2000, Change to the active voice
fluctuates
fluctuated
then
after experiencing a steady increase, that figure is expected to be 7.5% in 2025. In contrast
, the proportion of roads and railways decreased from 4.3% to 2.6% and was overtaken by health in 2006.
Additionally
, the percentage of education rise
from 2.1% to 3.2% in 2009, Wrong verb form
rose
while
after that it begun
to fall by 1% in 2013. Add the auxiliary verb
began
has begun
However
, it increased dramatically to 4.2% in 2025.Submitted by 1356388645 on
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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