The chart below shows the results of three surveys on absenteeism in a particular European country in the years 2000, 2005 and 2010. The results show the reasons people gave for not going to work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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in work. The Correct your spelling
absent
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are based on the results of three surveys done in a particular European country in three different years in one decade. The data
are measured in numbers.
Overall
, illness consistently
considered as the highest during the given period. Add a missing verb
is consistently
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apply
data
is relatively low compared to other reasons. Family responsibilities data
are approximately unchanged during the years .
On the one hand , The number of people who used illness as an excuse in 2000 was less than 45 and it reduce
in 2005 to exactly 40. Wrong verb form
reduced
In addition
, The figure cuntinue
to decline next Correct your spelling
continue
continued
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five
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reach
35 in 2010. With regard to stress, there is a slight Wrong verb form
reached
fluctuate
, it start at just over 5 in 2000 . Replace the word
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However
,the figure showed a slight decline in 2005 before shout up in 2010 and reach
around 13.
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reached
On the other hand
, personal needs experience a gradual increase . It start
at around 14 and Wrong verb form
started
then
it rose to around 20 and 23 in 2005 and 2010 respectively. Family responsibility is proximetely
the same in the given years at around 27. Correct your spelling
approximately
proximately
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was roughly 7 . It Fix the agreement mistake
problems
recover
in 2005 before fell slightly in 20010 to around 13.Wrong verb form
recovered
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