The bar chart shows the number of male and female people arrested by type of offence (crime). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The bar chart displays the percentage of
male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
arrested by offence type Fix the agreement mistake
females
by
2008-2009. The data points out the difference in criminal activities between genders around various categories.
Violence against the person , theft and handling stolen goods and criminal damage are the most striking categories,where female Change preposition
from
arrests
outnumber male arrests
. In particular
, the percentage of female arrests
for violence against the person stands out, reaching 33%, compared to approximately 31% for males. This
trend is consistent with theft and handling stolen goods where female arrests
are up to 30% , meanwhile male 20%. On the other hand
,criminal damage shows a slightly
increase Change the adverb
slight
of
male Change preposition
in
arrests
that embarks 10% and females across 8%. Rubbery and burglary offences
additionally
show the
higher rate of male apprehend, with figures close to 2%-8%,contrasted with females 1%-3%. Drug Correct article usage
a
offences
as well as
other offences
emerges
a slight increase of males apprehend around 8% and approximately 15%, Correct subject-verb agreement
emerge
besides
female
with 6% and 13%.The discrepancy is less pronounced in other Fix the agreement mistake
females
offences
and fraud and forgery, where male and female arrest rates are closer. Overall
men will always tend to have higher rates of arrests
whereas
women tend to have a higher percentage only at
violence and theft.Change preposition
of
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