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The following bar graph compares the age profiles of male and female cinema goers in the year 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The following bar graph compares the age profiles of male and female cinema goers in the year 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates a comparison of men and
women
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 who would like to go to the cinema based on their
age
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 in 2012.
Overall
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, females were almost perfectly higher in every
age
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category
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 whilst males only have one
group
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 of
age
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 above the opposite sex.
According to
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 the data, only men from 15 to 24 years old have more intention than
women
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 in that
category
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 to go to a cinema with slightly above 50%. The other
categories
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,
for example
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, the 25 to 34 and 35 to 44, are having a declined desire to go to the cineplex.
Although
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 the following
categories
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 had a dramatic increase, it was not even close and significant to match with the first
category
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. Three of them from
age
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 45 to 54, 55 to 64 and above 65 only have an average of 44%
Conversely
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,
women
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, all in all, deliberately would like to go to movie theatres with an average of 50% in all
categories
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. In the 15 to 24 years old
category
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, they have 47.7% of people would like to watch a movie at a box office, similar to the 25 to 34 and over 65-year-old
categories
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 with 48.9 % and 47.1%, respectively.
Furthermore
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, the
group
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 of
women
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 from
age
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 35 to 44, 45 to 54, and 55 to 64 have above 50%. They have 52% for the first
group
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 and 53% for both second and third
group
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words women, age, category, group, categories with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar graph
  • age profiles
  • cinema goers
  • demographic trends
  • percentage
  • attendance
  • age categories
  • gender comparison
  • target audience
  • cinema attendee
  • age-wise breakdown
  • demographic trends
  • highest/lowest attendance
  • noteworthy differences
  • age groups
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