The following bar graph compares the age profiles of male and female cinema goers in the year 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The chart illustrates a comparison of men and
women
who would like to go to the cinema based on their age
in 2012. Overall
, females were almost perfectly higher in every age
category
whilst males only have one group
of age
above the opposite sex.
According to
the data, only men from 15 to 24 years old have more intention than women
in that category
to go to a cinema with slightly above 50%. The other categories
, for example
, the 25 to 34 and 35 to 44, are having a declined desire to go to the cineplex. Although
the following categories
had a dramatic increase, it was not even close and significant to match with the first category
. Three of them from age
45 to 54, 55 to 64 and above 65 only have an average of 44%
Conversely
, women
, all in all, deliberately would like to go to movie theatres with an average of 50% in all categories
. In the 15 to 24 years old category
, they have 47.7% of people would like to watch a movie at a box office, similar to the 25 to 34 and over 65-year-old categories
with 48.9 % and 47.1%, respectively. Furthermore
, the group
of women
from age
35 to 44, 45 to 54, and 55 to 64 have above 50%. They have 52% for the first group
and 53% for both second and third group
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