The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.13:18/-strong/-heart:>:o:-((:-hĐã nhậnXem trước khi gửiThả Files vào đây để xem lại trước khi gửi
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The line graph demonstrates the proportion of the inhabitants in four Asian nations living in urban areas in a period of 50 years, starting in 1970.
In addition
to the forecast between 2030 and 2040.
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Overall
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it is clear that
there is an upward trend in the percentages of citizens in all countries, but the Linking Words
Philippines
has slightly decreased.
Having looked at the line graph more closely, we can see that in 1970, the Use synonyms
Philippines
was the highest at about 31% and Use synonyms
Malaysia
was the second at 30%. After Use synonyms
that is
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Thailand
at nearly 20%, Use synonyms
while
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Indonesia
had the lowest proportion at nearly 13%. In the next 10 years, all countries had a slight rise and Use synonyms
Malaysia
took the first place at 40%. In 1990 the Use synonyms
Philippines
climbed to the top at nearly 50% and Use synonyms
Indonesia
still had the lowest percentage at 21%. After a decade, Use synonyms
Malaysia
has sharply jumped to 60% Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
Philippines
slightly went down around 3%. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, both Linking Words
Thailand
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Indonesia
were at similar levels at approximately 30%.
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According to
2010, Linking Words
Indonesia
significantly increased to 40% Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
Philippines
slightly dropped to 40%. In 2020, all nations rose and Use synonyms
Malaysia
was still the highest Use synonyms
while
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Thailand
was the lowest. In the future, from 2030 to 2040, it is projected that all countries will grow, Use synonyms
Malaysia
will reach the peak at 80% and Use synonyms
Indonesia
will have a substantial increase to 60% and take the second top. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the Linking Words
Philippines
will be the third and Use synonyms
Thailand
will still have the lowest proportion of residents.Use synonyms
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