Sport is one of the most draws on television today. Some people argue that the practice of showing sport on television is to blame for the poor health of the young generation by encouraging them to watch rather than partake in physical activity. To what extent do you agree wit this view?

Sports programs are excessively aired on television. Many individuals support the notion that watching

sport

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on TV contributes to youngsters

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reluctance to

do

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exercise

;

however

, I hold the conviction that mental health can be a vital feature

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people to stay motivated to do

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. On the one hand, supporters of

this

belief point out that doing

exercise

and experiencing excitement can

similarly

release hormones of happiness into

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. It means that, if a person aims to achieve

this

feeling, he should be physically active.

Therefore

, audiences of

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on television get excited and their bodies' demands for happiness hormones are satisfied;

consequently

, they will lose their

interests

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in

the

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physical activities. In the United States,

for instance

, a survey conducted in 2023 showed that 40 per cent of younger generations reported they had

high

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level of excitement watching

sport

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programs on TV and

therefore

they did not consider it required to do

exercise

to get

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of cheerfulness and thrill.

Conversely

, opponents of

this

idea refer to the fact that there are more determining factors that might be effective in people's

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towards being physically active.

In other words

, mental health and

time

are thought to be more serious deterrent reasons. A depressed person,

for instance

, struggles with some internal and mental problems, which make him physically

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and unable to have a routine for doing

exercise

. An individual who is

also

forced to work eight hours a day, will not be able to dedicate enough

time

to staying active.

As a consequence

, watching

sport

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on TV has nothing to do with these

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of people's motivation to do

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or function physically. Let us take the UK as an example, where 60 per cent of those who are not at an appropriate fitness level, blamed their

time

limitation as the main reason

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their laziness and underactivity. In conclusion, after taking the aforementioned points into consideration, I am inclined to believe that,

although

lower

level

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of physical

activities

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are

due to

the increased broadcast of

sport

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programs, more remarkable factors encompassing lack of

time

and mental health should be known as reasons for decreasing

sport

activities.