Whether longer jail
time
helps
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rate has been a controversial topic recently.
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argues that education and financial support are better
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this
address
this
problem
some
people
think that the
time
is too short.
It is vital to understand that solving economic problems can be
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better way to decrease
crime
.
In other words
, law-breaking actions now mainly come from the
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economic situations since the cost of living become
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while
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some
people
, especially ones with low income or educational level
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are already
to make ends meet so they do not have any other choices but commit crimes.
Therefore
, if the
can resolve financial
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,
for example
offering more jobs, the percentage of
criminalFix the agreement mistake
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will see a downward trend.
However
, some
people
believe that the current prison sentences
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. Simply put, the
time
in
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prison in
this
time
is not enough for
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to think about the actions that they made and when they are released they will repeat that.
Additionally
, increasing the
time
for jail for about 2 - 3 years or
may beCorrect your spelling
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can be a great
for
people
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to commit
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since no one
wantChange the verb form
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to waste years of their life
to liveChange the verb form
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in
such
a bad place.
This
might be true if we do not solve the roots of why they do the
crime
, when they return to
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society, they still have the motivation to do it so the rate will not change.
This
is the writer's opinion that providing
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education is a really effective approach.
That is
to say, when
people
wereWrong verb form
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well educated since they were children, they will have a clear definition and distinctive line between good and bad things so that they will never step into the criminal life.
For example
, a
theftCorrect your spelling
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named Robert said that when he stole the dress for the first
time
his mom not only did not
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him but
also
encouraged him to steal more and that made him become a theft. If his mom stopped him at that
time
, he would not be in
this
situation.
In conclusion,
there are some
people
believing that extent the
jailChange preposition
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time
will make
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crime
to Fix the infinitive
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go down, it is more effective to attack financial issues and promote
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education.