The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph depicts the
propotion
of four different recycling materials Correct your spelling
proportion
promotion
such
as paper
and cardboard
, glass containers, aluminium
cans and plastics
that were recycled in the period
from 1982 to 2010.
According to
the data, in the
1982 year Correct article usage
apply
paper
& cardboard
and glass containers started at 65% and 50% respectively, whereas
aluminium
started recycling
process only Correct article usage
the recycling
since
1986 year and Change preposition
in
plastics
even 4 years later. The most recycled products were paper
and cardboard
for the whole period
, while
plastics
had the lowest percentage.
The graph illustrates that materials
that had only the positive growth were Correct article usage
the materials
plastics
and aluminium
cans, this products
rose from 2% and 5% to 9% and 45% respectively. The other materials had periods when their percentage slowly went down in different periods of time. Glass Change the determiner
this product
these products
containers
recycling Change the noun form
container
felt
down Correct your spelling
fell
at
40% Change preposition
by
by
8 years. The same situation was with Change preposition
over
paper
and cardboard
in period
from 1986 to 1990 and Add an article
the period
then
4 years later happend
again till the end of Correct your spelling
happened
happen
specified
Add an article
the specified
a specified
period
.
To sum up
, all types of recycling products in
the end of Change the preposition
at
period
didn't change at all except Correct article usage
the period
aluminium
cans that
increased their Correct pronoun usage
which
percent
almost Replace the word
percentage
in
5 times since the Change preposition
apply
begining
.Correct your spelling
beginning
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