Write about the following topic: Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, many schools see
English
as a more important subject than local languages
. In this
essay, we will discuss why students should learn English
more often and reasons to do it reversely.
From my point of view, learning English
more often is partly true and opens many opportunities for the students. Students will have a chance to study from any place in the world, travel, and change their experiences with others; because English
the most used language. However
, if we will
look at my native language Verb problem
apply
such
as Ukrainian, we will see that the only place where you can speak with someone in this
language is Ukraine.
On the other hand
, we have our local languages
and I completely agree that we should learn them but it depends on what needs you need it. We know that people can easily understand each other in their local languages
, express their emotions, etc. Let's take an example, you went somewhere on vacation to another country and you were lost without any knowledge of English
. As I see it, this
is not what you wanted from your vacation.
Overall
, we discussed many pros of learning English
but I want to sum up
, that our local languages
are also
as important as English
and we should not forget about their learning.Submitted by vladkruglovfencer on
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coherence cohesion
Your essay needs a clearer structure with distinct paragraphs for the introduction, body, and conclusion. Begin each paragraph with a clear topic sentence to guide the reader.
task achievement
Provide more specific supporting examples to strengthen your arguments. For instance, mention specific situations where knowing English has significantly benefited individuals or describe local language initiatives.
task achievement
Ensure that your ideas are fully developed. Instead of merely stating that local languages are important, explain why they are crucial for cultural preservation and identity.
task achievement
Your essay has a clear opinion on the importance of both English and local languages, which is a good starting point for a balanced discussion.
task achievement
You effectively recognized the benefits of learning English, such as global opportunities and the ability to communicate widely.
coherence cohesion
Your conclusion touches on the need to balance learning English and local languages, which is a thoughtful and nuanced view.
Your opinion
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