You would like to rent a car for a holiday. Write to the car rental agency. In your letter • Explain what type of car you would like • Give details of when you would like the car • Request more information about the cost
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to ask you to arrange a rental
car
to travel to Paris ,on the next week.
First of all, My family and I are going to travel to Paris from Barcelona. During our trip
we would like to discover virgin natural areas. Add a comma
trip,
therefore
, we decided to rent a car
. You are kindly requested to consider a sedan new car
equipped with air
conditioning system and GPS. Correct article usage
an air
More over
, I appreciate it if you provide us with a Correct your spelling
Moreover
child-seat
for my Correct your spelling
child seat
5 year old
daughter.
I will pick up the Add a hyphen
5-year-old
car
from one of your deputies in Barcelona on July 10th and deliver it in
your agency in Paris on July 14th.
Change preposition
to
In addition
,although
I have seen the rental cost in
your website, I would be so thankful if you provide me with Change preposition
on
the
breakdown of Correct article usage
a
cost
. Correct article usage
the cost
For instance
, I would like to know more about insurance cost
.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
ZMFix the agreement mistake
costs
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single idea per paragraph
Consider breaking down longer sentences into shorter ones for better readability.
logical structure
To improve logical structure, ensure smooth transitions between different sections of your letter.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are both polite and appropriately formal.
complete response
The letter provides a clear explanation of the type of car needed, dates for rental, and a request for more cost details, fulfilling the task requirements well.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is suitable and polite for a formal request.
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