The chart below shows the global sales of different kinds of digital games from 2000 to 2006.

The chart below shows the global sales of different kinds of digital games from 2000 to 2006.
The given chart illustrates the data on
world wide
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worldwide
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sales of 4 various of digital
games
between 2000 and 2006.
Overall
, it can be seen that handheld
games
was
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were
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the largest and increased over the period,
while
console
games
went down and became the lowest. We can
also
observe that online
games
and mobile phone
games
begin later the others but they
climed
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climb
each phase. Looking at the figures in
further
detail, handheld
games
was
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were
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the highest and started at 11$
bn
in 2000,
then
, it rose gradually and stood at 18$
bn
at the end
.
By contrast
, console
games
had about 6$
bn
at the beginning,
it
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which
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slightly decreased each year before
stopped
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stopping
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at 3%
bn
. Turning to the remaining statistics, mobile
games
and online
games
appeared later than console
games
and handheld
games
, in 2001,
however
, they grew
up
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dramatically from nearly 1$
bn
to 12$
bn
and from zero to 7$
bn
in 2006, respectively.
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