The two maps below show an island, before and after the constaruction of some tourist facilities.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the constaruction of some tourist facilities.
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The two illustrations illustrate the same
island
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before and after undergoing the changes because of
tourist
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facility constructions.
Overall
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, before the development, the
island
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barely has anything but some
trees
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scattering
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scattered
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in the east and west
as well as
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a beach
in
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on
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the west coast.
However
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, it has gone through
the
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a
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transformnation
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transformation
. All
facilties
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facilities
needed for tourists are there with a pier in the south, making the
island
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easy to access. Interestingly, all the original
trees
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remain where they have been. Before the
contruction
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construction
,
trees
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are
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were
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there in the east, a few denser when compared to those in the east. It is difficult to get there as no sign
for
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of
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any kind of
transpots
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transport
transports
.
This
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all
change
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changed
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after it
is
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was
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developped
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developed
as a
tourist
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destination; a pier is there in the south connecting to the reception area in the middle of the
island
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, which can be accessed with the vehicle track from the pier. The
restaurnt
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restaurant
is located in the north of the reception as it is linked with the vehicle
trac
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track
as well.
Tourist
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accommodation is built in the east after the tree area, and all are connected via footpath.
Likewise
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, the other part of
tourist
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accommodation in the west right before the beach for swimming, and all are linked via footpath. In conclusion, the
island
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has
tranformed
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transformed
and is ready to serve the tourists with all facilities.
However
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, all nature remains as no
trees
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have been
cutdown
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cut down
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but have become part of the facilities on the
island
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island, tourist, trees with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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