The two maps below show an island, before and after the constaruction of some tourist facilities.
The two illustrations illustrate the same
island
before and after undergoing the changes because of tourist
facility constructions.
Overall
, before the development, the island
barely has anything but some trees
scattering
in the east and west Wrong verb form
scattered
as well as
a beach in
the west coast. Change preposition
on
However
, it has gone through the
Correct article usage
a
transformnation
. All Correct your spelling
transformation
facilties
needed for tourists are there with a pier in the south, making the Correct your spelling
facilities
island
easy to access. Interestingly, all the original trees
remain where they have been.
Before the contruction
, Correct your spelling
construction
trees
are
there in the east, a few denser when compared to those in the east. It is difficult to get there as no sign Wrong verb form
were
for
any kind of Change preposition
of
transpots
.
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transport
transports
This
all change
after it Replace the word
changed
is
Wrong verb form
was
developped
as a Correct your spelling
developed
tourist
destination; a pier is there in the south connecting to the reception area in the middle of the island
, which can be accessed with the vehicle track from the pier. The restaurnt
is located in the north of the reception as it is linked with the vehicle Correct your spelling
restaurant
trac
as well. Correct your spelling
track
Tourist
accommodation is built in the east after the tree area, and all are connected via footpath. Likewise
, the other part of tourist
accommodation in the west right before the beach for swimming, and all are linked via footpath.
In conclusion, the island
has tranformed
and is ready to serve the tourists with all facilities. Correct your spelling
transformed
However
, all nature remains as no trees
have been cutdown
but have become part of the facilities on the Correct your spelling
cut down
island
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