The maps below show the changes in the art gallery on the ground floor in 2005 and present day.

The maps below show the changes in the art gallery on the ground floor in 2005 and present day.
The maps illustrate the layout of a craft arcade and how it has changed from 2005 to now.
Overall
, the building has undergone several shifts internally, with the addition of several new places and facilities, and access for the disabled. In 2005, there was a café and shop in the top left corner and exhibition room 4 in the bottom left corner of the art
gallery
. An
area
between these two places was occupied by a
gallery
office. A space on the right side was taken up by three exhibition spaces named 1,2,3 which were located respectively from the bottom to the top. In the middle, there were stairs to the upper floor between the café and shop and place 3. The reception desk was located beside
area
4 and the
gallery
office.
In addition
, an entrance was opposite the stairs through the entrance hall. At present day, there are some changes in the art arcade. On the left side of the map, the café is removed and the room is now a
gallery
shop. The office is now occupied by three vending machines.
Moreover
, place 4 is divided into two different areas named temporary exhibitions and a children’s playing
area
. On the right side, three places remain intact to now. In the middle, an elevator is added next to
area
3, which leads to the reduction of stairs to the upper floor in size A reception desk is now moved to the middle of the art arcade.
Furthermore
, the entrance is upgraded by adding a ramp for wheelchairs.
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