Indvidual greed and selfishnesss have been the basis of modern society. Some people think that we must return to the older and more treaditional values of respect for the family and local community in order to create a better world to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a growing concern that

the

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widespread of being selfish and

greedy

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are increasingly becoming prevalent in modern

society

. It is argued that sticking to the values of respecting family and

community

is an essential trait

one

could have to improve our

world

.

This

essay strongly agrees that implementing virtues that make a difference in our

families

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family's

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lives and

community

will influence the

world

we live in.

Firstly

، having

respect

towards those who are close to us will reflect on many other aspects of life, and

secondly

, thinking of

one self

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and wanting to have it all will negatively impact

one

's life. On the

one

hand, in our upbringing there are some qualities that some of us were lucky to have been introduced to,

respect

is

one

of the primary qualities that most

families

worldwide appreciate.

Furthermore

,

respect

is not merely a

religous

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religious

teaching most of us have learned growing up, it is more of a universal language

that is

thought of highly by most people, regardless of their social, and

ethnicities

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differences. As if it was

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human nature, everyone is drawn to

respect

.

Also

,

one

would not be able to have a respectful status in

society

without being taught

respect

growing up in the first place.

Moreover

, being respected in the

community

will push people to behave in the best way possible. To illustrate

this

, a study that was conducted by

University

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of Toronto showed that as the level of

respect

increases in the

community

, people tend to engage in tasks that are more beneficial to

society

.

Thus

,

respect

have

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a positive impact on the

world

in general.

On the other hand

, being greedy and wanting to have all benefits for

one self

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oneself

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is the driving force behind modern societies

who

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have forgotten moral values.

For instance

, some argue that young generations are not putting much effort

to enhance

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the way they

are

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treating elderly,

this

worrying trend will certainly reflect on every aspect of our daily lives.

Moreover

, being selfish will not only affect the way we treat family and

community

in general,

it

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will

increase

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the sense of individuality,

gradually

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detachment from

society

will occur.

In other words

, the comradery sense in the

society

will be lost. In conclusion, it is vital to value

respect

for

families

and communities rather than greediness, thereby nurturing virtues is essential

will

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and will

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make a remarkable impact on

families

, communities and

world

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the world

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.