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rReading books and articles is one of the best ways to improve your writing skills.Do you agree or disagree

#books #articles #skills
It is a common belief that the best way to improve writing
skills
 is
reading
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 more
books
 and newspapers.
This
 writer partly agrees with
this
 statement There are several solutions to improve writing
skills
,First of all, people can learn the ways some authors connect
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each
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 by reading
books
.To explain, if people
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spend
spent
 leisure time on reading
books
, it is possible that their scores for coherence in
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their
 essays will
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. Another benefit of reading articles is the main way to develop new
vocabularies
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.
In other words
,
books
 nowadays include a lot of academic
vocabularies
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 which
are
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 useful for writing essays, readers cannot only expand their knowledge but
also
 get
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However
, some
of
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books
 can
also
 bring drawbacks to readers if they choose unsuitable
books
 for
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their
 purposes.There are a lot of people
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 only enjoy
in
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reading some
books
 which are not improve their writing
skills
such
 as comic
books
.
As a result
, they cannot develop any new
skills
 for writing and
also
 waste their time. In conclusion, it is true that writing
skills
 may improve by reading
books
 and articles.In spite of only paying attention
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 reading,readers should carefully
in choosing
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 the right
books
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task achievement
While your essay offers a clear perspective on how reading can improve writing skills, the ideas could be further developed with more specific examples and arguments.
coherence cohesion
Organize your ideas with clear topic sentences for each paragraph to improve logical flow. Consider placing counterpoints in separate paragraphs for better clarity.
coherence cohesion
Address minor grammatical mistakes and spelling errors to strengthen overall language quality. For example, 'ech sentences' should be 'each sentence,' and 'spenf' should be 'spend.'
introduction conclusion present
Your introduction and conclusion are present and contribute to the overall coherence of your essay.
task achievement
You offer relevant points about how reading books and articles expand vocabulary and coherence in writing.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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